I can hardly believe it, but we’re only one month out from the release of my debut novel, Amber & Dusk! I’m so incredibly thrilled to be sharing this book with the world and I can’t wait for you all to read it.
(If you’re only here for the giveaway, scroll down to the bottom of the page. I promise I won’t be too mad.)
I’ve talked a lot about my publishing journey both here at Spellbound Scribes and elsewhere. I’ve talked a little about the inspiration for writing Amber & Dusk, and likely will write up a nice long post about all the research and media that inspired the book next month. But today, I want to talk about that one magical sentence on the first page of the first chapter. You got it–The First Line!
I think first lines are magical. I have a running list on my note app with my favorites, and I return to it often for inspiration (“I was the shadow of the waxwing slain/ By the false azure in the windowpane;” Nabokov). I actually even have some first lines memorized from books I didn’t even read (like Pynchon’s epic “A screaming comes across the sky.”) Yes, yes, you could say I’m a little obsessed. So it will come as no surprise that my obsession extends to my own work.
I spend a lot of time crafting the first lines of all my books, and Amber & Dusk was no exception. But what was unique about this first line is that it stayed exactly the same from the very beginning. The name of the main character changed (twice), a ghost king appeared and then (thankfully) disappeared, countless scenes were cut and reworked and added and revised. But the first line–it stuck! And so, to celebrate the 1 month countdown (technically, 33 days) here is the first line!
And because I’m feeling extra celebratory, here’s an exclusive opportunity to win a signed hardback copy of Amber & Dusk, with character artwork, a personalized note from me, and an amber pendant reminiscent of the one worn by my main character! To enter, follow the link for ways to enter, such as commenting on this post and following me and the Scribes on social media. Good luck!
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That’s a fantastic opening line, and I can’t wait to read the whole thing!!
Thank you dear 🙂
Great first line! I’m still thrilled that I got to beta read this book. Can’t wait to read the final version. Congratulations a thousand times over to you!
Thanks, lovely!
Reblogged this on The Musings of an Author in Progress and commented:
I had to share this on my blog as well. I was very lucky to beta this book and if you haven’t pre-ordered your copy yet, you should. But here’s your chance to win a signed hardback and some swag! Get to clicking!
That’s a fantastic first line! Looks like an amazing read😍
But for the giveaway – I wonder if it’s international?😁